ethernight
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February 12th, 2009 11:20 pm

whatimeantosay prompted me to tell her about my shitty day in haiku form. I thought I'd share.


My computer? Sucked.
Project finished... then delayed.
Abundant drama.

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From:whatimeantosay
Date:February 14th, 2009 - 12:02 am
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I like your punctuation marks, but isn't "drama" two syllables? Maybe "Abundant drama"?
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From:whatimeantosay
Date:February 14th, 2009 - 12:03 am
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Especially the question mark.
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From:ethernight
Date:February 14th, 2009 - 01:31 am
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Hah, your right! Edited appropriately.

And thanks. :)
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